Thursday, September 17, 2009

I Remember by Shanna Kodo

at
Labels:

6 comments:

  1. suzie2September 17, 2009 at 1:15 PM

    ok first off. i swear i felt all that deep emotions. you wrote a very power script just the music and your tone of voice how you sound very sad.. it made me feel sad too,but as a reader i was very focused and intuned with your story...i liked it. this tory you wrote touched my heart. I'm sure your grandma is always with you god bless...

    love sue

    ReplyDelete
  2. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2009 at 5:49 PM

    I would like to say, you've touch my heart with your story. When my grandma past away, I felt as you did. I felt as though I took her for granted. You have truly touched my heart, I cried when I watched your story. If you don't get an A++++++++ I will scream at the teacher for you.

    ReplyDelete
  3. hiwaSeptember 21, 2009 at 12:25 PM

    That was a beautiful piece about your Grandma. I didn't have grandparents that I could grow up with and so when my only living Grandparent died, I didn't feel the remorse that you felt when yours passed and I envy that kind of love. I felt for you and you should tell your Grandmother's story someday. Good job!

    ReplyDelete
  4. UnknownSeptember 21, 2009 at 8:07 PM

    This story was very touching. I also grew up close to my grandma, and this story made me realize how important it is to spend time with her now. I cant say i know how you feel but you have shown me how lucky i am.

    ReplyDelete
  5. kingwhitSeptember 24, 2009 at 9:46 PM

    This story was AWESOME! it really hit the spot when it comes to that unconditional love we have for family... i was young when both my dads parents died so i didnt get to realize how short life really can be. I think your story was touching and organized in events.
    GREAT JOB!

    ReplyDelete
  6. Nagai SenseiFebruary 10, 2010 at 9:50 PM

    shanna <3

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)