Tuesday, February 17, 2009

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2 comments:

  1. brentonoFebruary 24, 2009 at 8:31 PM

    wow dude, you COMPLETELY changed your story, i was expecting the story about your grabdparents and the soldiers again, but when it changed to the aneurysm i was really caught by surprise. the point of view was on you the whole time, it focused on what you thought back then, and what you think now.

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  2. megsFebruary 25, 2009 at 11:11 AM

    You did a really good job. Its hard to talk about a subject like this.
    The tone you have throughout the story is a steady tone which matched the story. Good job.

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