Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Heart Like a Lion by Deandra Viluan

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3 comments:

  1. ramatiasFebruary 23, 2009 at 2:43 AM

    liked the roar in the beginning, really got my attention. i like how the you explained the lions height, funny.

    out of it all, i like how your voice changed with the mood of the story. if mood is the word. good job.

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  2. sylviaFebruary 24, 2009 at 11:38 PM

    i thought it was really cute. i like rayden. =)

    i thought your images matched the tone of your vice completely. i like your quote at the end "with the heart like a lion all desires can be reached."

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2009 at 4:09 PM

    hey deandra,
    your story came out good. i knew it would turn out good from the begginning. such a cute story about you and your boyfriend.
    your voice was great and had a good pace and tempo. your images fit your story well.

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