Monday, February 16, 2009

Hawaii National Guard Youth Challenge Academy

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2009 at 12:55 AM

    Wow. Your story changed a lot from the first draft. I like how you used your acceptance speech in this and I liked when your dad said "That's my boy again!" This was really good.

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  2. sylviaFebruary 24, 2009 at 11:48 PM

    it must have been tough going in there not being able to talk to any of your friends.

    i thought you did give alot of detail, like you made your point. you went in there to change and you did.
    thats good for you.

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